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A new world has been born
Just as so many grew and died
None of them stay for long

I almost cannot speak
For fear of scaring away
This trembling newborn

I can feel the tremors
The old familiar sense
That something doesn't quite fit

The energies seem wrong
Something is out of place
The doubt is setting fires

This world is doomed to die
But I'm going to make it live
The change happens now

This time it has to be right
This time it has to be true
Or this time is the last
©2007-2009 ~AetherRabbit
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Another one.

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:iconcomritza:
Beautiful, I love how the tone changes into such a hopeful and determined one at the end.

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Do you really have to pee in a girl's mouth to make babies?
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Ditto man, its cool! im always a fan of a determined use of English to paint a determined picture. (blethering)

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If something you believe in isn't worth fighting for, it isn't worth believing in.

<insert funny coment here>
:iconaetherrabbit:
Thanks. I hadn't even noticed it... but now that you've brought it up... I meant to do that. :D

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I am Jack's mending heart.
:iconaetherrabbit:
Thanks. Hopefully there will be more if life ever settles down. :D

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I am Jack's mending heart.

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